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Friday 12 March 2021

writing - Tuna [eels]

 Over the last couple of weeks we have been researching information about Tuna (eels). We have been learning to write a report using the information we have found.


Our challenges were to include a complex sentence and to use a hyphen followed by a list.



There are different types of eels there black,yellow,golden,olive,light brown. They are long, thin,narrow.They feel slippery, very heavy they max up to 20 kg, slimy, wriggly, slippery and wet. Long-fin eels can be found in NZ shimmering around the shady shallow shore; they live up to two 100 years old but average 35-52 years old.it uses its sense of smell to seek its prey.












Have you ever eaten a eel?

4 comments:

  1. hi Archie
    I loved how much info you have in your blog
    maybe you could had said how rare it was
    no I have not ate eel

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    1. Thanks Travis for reading my blog and commenting.

      thanks for the advice
      eels are pretty good you should try it one day.

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  2. Hi Archie l loved how you put capital letters and full stops you have lots of info. Btw I have had eel before not my favorite but it was yummy

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  3. hi Archie, i see that you have used lots of full stops, comas, and capital letters but you are missing a capital letter of the (Eels) part. over all this is a good piece of writing i have learnt a lot from it.

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